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617Blodrin: Bauglir A, and B as typed. See line 618.618Bauglir Ban’s son A, and B as typed (Bauglir > Blodrin carefully-made early change, Ban > Bor hasty and later). See lines 661, 696, 990.631Fangair A, Fangros B as typed.636Tengwethiel [sic] A, Tain-Gwethil B as typed. Cf. line 431.653Túrin Thaliodrin A, and B as typed. Cf. lines 115, 333, 720.661, 696As at line 618.711Aiglir-angrin A, Aiglir Angrin B as typed, emended roughly in pencil to Eiglir Engrin; cf. line 1055. In the Tale of Turambar occurs Angorodin (the Iron Mountains), II.77.711–14These lines read in A (and as typed in B, with of Hell is reared for of the Hells of Iron):

where Aiglir-angrin the Iron Hills lieand Thangorodrim’s thunderous mountaino’er the hopeless halls of the Hells of ironwrought at the roots of the ruthless hills.

718Cf. Bilbo’s second riddle to Gollum.720As at line 653.780Delimorgoth A, Delu-Morgoth B as typed, dark Morgoth a late pencilled emendation. At lines 11 and 51 Delu-Morgoth is an emendation of Delimorgoth in B.816Tûn also in A; see lines 50, 430.818–20Against these lines my father wrote in the margin of B: ‘Captured in battle at gates of Angband.’826o’er the black boulders of the Blasted Plain A (marked with query).834mercy: magic A, and B as typed; mercy in pencil and not quite certain.946Daideloth A emended at time of writing to Dor-na-Maiglos, Dor-na-Fauglith B as typed. In margin of A is written: ‘a plateau from Dai “high”, Deloth “plain”; contrast II. 337, entry Dor-na-Dhaideloth.990Blodrin Ban’s son A, and B as typed; Ban’s > Bor’s later in B. At lines 617–18, 661, 696 A, and B as typed, had Bauglir, changed to Blodrin in B.1055Aiglir Angrin A, and B as typed; see line 711. Bauglir A and B.1098This line is emended in B, but the reading is uncertain: apparently Then his bow unbending Beleg asked him:1137In the margin of B is written r?, i.e. dreadly for deadly.1147East: South A, and B as typed.1198bosméd (bosomed) written thus in both A and B.1214Nargil: Loruin A, with Nargil added as an alternative.1324Túrin Thaliodrin A, and B as typed; see lines 653, 720.1335Thalion-Túrin A, and B as typed.

Commentary on Part II ‘Beleg’